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Is this all real?
What is this sensation we feel?
Are we just reliving the life we once lived?
Did we die already and just get revived?

Who once decided what's left and right?
Who sees everything in black or white?
Is this whole world just a dream?
Is this all part of some scheme?

The answers to the questions were not written in ink
It always changes no matter how much you think
Because you're neither right nor wrong
People have been searching for answers for so long

Laws and rules,
Are just some of our tools
Tools to make this world seem more vast
If they are not believed in then they are just the past

Do we have some weird ideal?
Are we nothing yet real?
An answer is that ''we are'' therefore we exist
But that doesn't always mean we can coexist

Searching for answers can lead us to depression
But when we find the answer, do we remember what is the question?
Something I wrote during the test week last week (consider that a short hiatus)
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Edit: I fixed the two typo's that you guys pointed out

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ChildoftheBeat Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Nice work!

I often wonder myself - I love 'Matrix', 'The Truman show' 'Brazil' and 'What dreams may come' I suppose due to a fascination with some of these ideas, which are also an important theme in buddhism.

Well done :D
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading and glad you like it ^^
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ChildoftheBeat Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
You are very welcome, it made me both think and feel, which is wonderful - a very insightful piece of poetry :-)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're giving me too much praise I think ^^'
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ChildoftheBeat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
That's up to you ;p - it felt appropriate at the time... many of the ideas / thoughts are interesting, I can connect with and don't think I'm the only one - some have been around for a long time...
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ktkeiper Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Question: Should 'found' in the last line be 'find'?
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I thought I had changed that one already
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AvengerKitty12 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are a very emotional, deep writer. I like the ebb and flow of your poetry :)
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linwriter Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
I agree with AvengerKitty12 comments :)
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AvengerKitty12 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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