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Is this the real world we see?
Or is it just an illusion of reality?
Will death be the thing to set us free?
Or is that just a weird mentality?

Is life just an illusion?
Do we perhaps preserve things differently?
And is this all just a big delusion?

We want the people to think free
But can they be free if they need to follow the rules?
Can they break free,
Without being branded as fools?

If we want to know more
And learn the real truth
We have to venture in the unknown more

A wise man doesn't take the road everybody sees
A wise man travels off the road and leaves a track
I needed to get my mind of things
I visited my grandmother today, she's dying.
Doctor said that she might not make it to tomorrow...

Anyways I'm here to get my mind of that and that's basically why I wrote this.

Life is just an illusion I think.
Maybe the life we live is a dream, and what we think is a dream is the reality.
We can't be sure before we try to discover it.
Those we dare to might be branded a fool or outcast, but they may discover something of the utmost importance.

Please leave feedback so I can improve in the comments.

Written by Jerrel Simons
Jerrel Simons AKA Koratoshisfriend

EDIT: My grandmother passed away in the night of the 25th of July on the 26th of July peacefully in her sleep
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deeclear Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like this poem and I need to learn from it. I turned 30 in june and ever since then I have been doing more thing for the 1st time and until I die I want to experience more and more new things.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well it's a good thing that you're trying out new things
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deeclear Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very true. I like trying new things. It is so much fun.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
happy new year and let's make it a good one to try things in
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MysticHorns Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Professional Writer
Wonderful written...much love for you!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for reading
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Writer
The rhymes are very nicely done, and the poem as a whole is very well-written. The message is clear for all to read, definitely.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the feedback ^^
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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