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It's something we all have to face
Sometimes we face it with just a silent gaze
No emotions to be shown on our face
Feeling like things went faster than a race

It all comes to an end
It's something from which we cannot defend

Some face it with fear
Some face it with courage
But it's something that you don't have to be scared of
No matter what it is you fear

What behind you is the past
It might have gone a little too fast
But take my hand my friend
And let us walk down this road
And let us not fear
What is at the end
First of all, let me thank :iconkarvamato: for helping with this piece, she's really full of great ideas
Second of all I would like to ask all of you if you could give some feedback, it's okay if you don't but I would like it very much
Third of all thanks for reading ^^

This is a short poem about walking down the figurative road that is life and reaching the end.
I know most of you fear it, but you should welcome it. See it not as an end, see it as a new beginning

Jerrel Simons AKA :iconkoratoshisfriend:
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AraisEriamEel Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very nice. It's pretty deep. and makes you think about your life and what has lead you up to who you are now.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, glad you like it ^^
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AraisEriamEel Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mhm :)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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fabrixio01 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
jejeje I have PS3 too, my name is fabrixio01 :D
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh cool ^^
I put you on ma list and will add you when I get the change
What games do you play? o3o
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fabrixio01 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
I have God of war 3, all Assassin's Creed, Call of Duty modern warfare, Heavy Rain, Little Big Planet
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have AC: Revelations, Borderlands, Modern Warfare 1 and 3, Battlefield 3, Just Cause 2, Skyrim and Crysis 2
maybe we can play together some time
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Life-of-Art Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
This is really good :)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much
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