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Feel the rain dripping on your face
Sitting somewhere in an unknown place
You might just had your heart broken
Those feelings of yours go unspoken

Let the rain wash your pain away
Let it wash away and find your way
Let the rain slowly heal your wounds
It heals your heart and will hide your wounds

The rain will stay with you for years
It's one of those things that always cares
Because in the rain nobody will see your tears
A lil short this time and not so great.
My laptop unfortunatly has crashed so I'm trying to re-install everything this weekend, but first I need to salvage as many works as possible which will also take quite some time.

This is actually a rewritten poem of mine, it's based on a (famous) quote.

Challenge: First person to comment the specific quote and the person who said it wins, everybody gets only one chance.

Written by Jerrel Simons
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Talty Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   Artisan Crafter
Hello, you've been featured as part of the article Celebrating Diversity #9 :la:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Writer
I really like this poem allot. :blackrose:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it, you're welcome to check out the rest of my gallery if you like
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AvianEx Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hello,
I have a group, :iconwielders-of-the-pen: and they need more people entering their poetry contests, and I thought you might be interested.
I've noticed you like writing, and poetry is a great way to practice!
Also, if no-one joins the group will be closed D:
So if you can join and tell them you're interested, then that would be great!
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pje0860 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I hope your days goes well again
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yep
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pje0860 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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RandomCorporation Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Sometimes I only cry in the rain, so I can't tell wether its tears or rain running down m face".
Ehg, I forget where I heard that from. I think a comedy :/
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's a good quote but not the one I'm looking for unfortunatly
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
i love it and i really like the rhyming =D
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it and thanks for reading
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:iconkilluaxme:
killuaxme Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
you are welcome =D
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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:iconkilluaxme:
killuaxme Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
=D
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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sen22 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So true. I like the rhymes.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
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sen22 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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RipVanWinkle316 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually really like this! Don't sell yourself short XD
This reminds me of what Mustang says in FMA but I have no idea of who said what original quote.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it my friend
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RipVanWinkle316 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too XD
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Shinohida Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I don't mind if it's short :D
Hope your laptop backs up soon

Love the poem :clap:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope we can have my laptop fixed by this afternoon xD
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valleigh Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Writer
I love this, and I know people can relate to this.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
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valleigh Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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valleigh Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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lucidcece Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know the feeling of a broken heart. ur insight on it is correct. it hurts and time heals all wounds. I enjoyed. reading this.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am glad you liked it my friend
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lucidcece Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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lucidcece Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^·^
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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AcousticSlide Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Niemand kann mich sehen in der regen weinen. Ich immer noch gerne in der regen mit meiner Schwester laufen auch. (Sorry, I slip into my home language frequenty!)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ich kann Deutsch lesen und sprechen, aber ich kann leider nicht so gut Deutsch schreiben
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AcousticSlide Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah! Ich sehe! Nun, ich kann Sie gut verstehen!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, ich kann sie auch verstehen aber das ist manchmal schwierig weil Deutsch nicht meine Muttersprache ist
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AcousticSlide Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Ja, zum Glück für mich ist Englisch eine ziemlich fließend Sprache für mich. Eigentlich ist Deutsch meine Art von fließenden Sprache ... ah gut, es ist goos zu wissen, kann ich ein gutes Gespräch mit jemandem, der meine Heimat Sprache sprechen kann. Danke. Ich bin eine Art Heimweh jetzt ... aber ich bin immer noch froh, dass ein Gespräch mit Ihnen, Herr Koratoshisfriend.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Es ist gut zu hören das English eine fließende Sprache für Sie ist. Ich kann Deutsch mit Sie sprechen wenn Sie dass wöllte, aber ich kann nicht zu gut Deutsch schreiben. Warum haben Sie Heimweh?
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AcousticSlide Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh, you know, missing, my siblings and parents. My little sister's birthday today, so I'm not be able to be there. I took advantage of her time with me when I saw it. So, yeah, it's pretty hard not to see them as much.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah I see, missing your problems must be hard and I'm sorry to hear that
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SilentArrow Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I always like walking in the rain, so no-one sees me crying
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just lacking one thing (read the challenge again)
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magalbagal Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Writer
wow that's deep
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Do you like it?
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magalbagal Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
yup. lovee it
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