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Feel the rain dripping on your face
Sitting somewhere in an unknown place
You might just had your heart broken
Those feelings of yours go unspoken

Let the rain wash your pain away
Let it wash away and find your way
Let the rain slowly heal your wounds
It heals your heart and will hide your wounds

The rain will stay with you for years
It's one of those things that always cares
Because in the rain nobody will see your tears
A lil short this time and not so great.
My laptop unfortunatly has crashed so I'm trying to re-install everything this weekend, but first I need to salvage as many works as possible which will also take quite some time.

This is actually a rewritten poem of mine, it's based on a (famous) quote.

Challenge: First person to comment the specific quote and the person who said it wins, everybody gets only one chance.

Written by Jerrel Simons
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Talty Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   Artisan Crafter
Hello, you've been featured as part of the article Celebrating Diversity #9 :la:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Writer
I really like this poem allot. :blackrose:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it, you're welcome to check out the rest of my gallery if you like
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AvianEx Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hello,
I have a group, :iconwielders-of-the-pen: and they need more people entering their poetry contests, and I thought you might be interested.
I've noticed you like writing, and poetry is a great way to practice!
Also, if no-one joins the group will be closed D:
So if you can join and tell them you're interested, then that would be great!
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pje0860 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I hope your days goes well again
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yep
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pje0860 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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RandomCorporation Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Sometimes I only cry in the rain, so I can't tell wether its tears or rain running down m face".
Ehg, I forget where I heard that from. I think a comedy :/
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's a good quote but not the one I'm looking for unfortunatly
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
i love it and i really like the rhyming =D
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