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In the murky waters of the swamp
Where the air is quite damp
Your heart will be stricken with fear
For the beast draws near

His eyes will gaze through your soul
If you stare at him too long he will take a high toll
He will rip the flesh from your bones
And then crush your bones using stones

His hind legs give him incredible speed
Just so you can become his feed
His wings are large
and leave his enemies in fear

Can somebody slay this mighty beast?
Without ending up as his feast?
Nobody will know
But I know I don't want him as a foe
A commission I did for the amazing :iconibeblu: please have a look at her work.

:thumb303021610: Preview image drawn by :iconibeblu:
Please go have a look at the real work: [link]

Poem written by Jerrel Simons
Preview picture © :iconibeblu:
Poem © :iconkoratoshisfriend:

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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Writer
:wave: Hi! Your piece has been featured in #Lit-Visual-Alliance's Sixth Allied Artwork Feature! Please :+fav: the article to bring attention to the feature. Thank you for being a part of the Alliance! :salute:
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singitsister Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
i realy like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and dont hate me but i dont really like... "And then crush your bones using stones" i just dont think it fits
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I know the sentence put me off too, but some people do like it and it does give that feel of it being a horrific monster so I dunno
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singitsister Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
true but i still just feel like it doesnt belong, but thats just me! very good though!
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^
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Angelic1994Demon Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
looks like a chimera from Full Metal Alechemist i love it. great drawing ^.^
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
then please check out :iconibeblu:'s page cause she was the one who made the picture, she's an amazing artist to say the least
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sen22 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like it, especially the description in the first verse.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
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link-zelda22 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
awesome and well written!
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