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They say speaking is silver and silence is gold,
In some cases it might be true.
But there is also a truth that goes untold,
Even if it might be quite blue.

Silence is sometimes bad,
Not always so don't get upset.
Some things that are evil can make us go mad,
Some things that are even a threat.

Even if your enemies will make your blood boil,
The silence of your friends will be what hurts you more.
Words might hurt us, but silence can torment us.
Something that was suggested to me by somebody that I thought, hey why not give it a shot.

In the End, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Quote Martin Luther King, Jr.

(I used that quote to get an idea what to write about)

I love it if you like it
and if you could leave some feedback so I can improve that will be great

Written by Jerrel Simons
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Tigerfire900 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013   Writer
This makes me want to talk more, which is a good thing, since I don't talk that much. ^^;
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
awwwwwwwww i think u must publish ur poems,,!!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I believe that is a overstatement xD
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
nopppee i loooooove it, all of them!!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I see xD
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
:iconwinkingplz:
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
^_^
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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magalbagal Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
When our eyes can still sees...so the rumor insists silence IS golden. what is it mean? excellentr piece by the way
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's a saying that silence is golden, because it says more then words, but it also implies that silence is a good thing
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:iconmagalbagal:
magalbagal Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Writer
thats beautiful
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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theresahelmer Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
When our eyes can still sees...so the rumor insists silence IS golden?
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's a saying, people say it around here pretty often
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:icontheresahelmer:
theresahelmer Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
Yap...
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
i love this poem. it is so true that silence can sometimes torment more than said words.
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah
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:iconkilluaxme:
killuaxme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
=)
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Feanor-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So True! So very true!
Excellent poem!
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is a great idea. Beautiful way of putting it ^_^
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you enjoyed it
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marton96 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
I really relate to the poem, I love it.
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
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sen22 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
<3 Love it. :thumbsup:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you like it
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KikuMizu Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
I just had an internet argument with someone so I know this feeling.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
any feedback you could give?
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KikuMizu Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Well I have never heard that speaking is silver but I did like the last line. The silent treatment is what my parents sometimes used when I was misbehaving and it felt exactly like that.
It was a bit weird in the middle when you started talking about evil but you tied it in nicely with the third group, connecting the first and the second groups together. You didn't say "don't give in" or "let is pass" which makes it even better because then you allow the reader to come to their own conclusions.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well it is a saying, or well an old saying around here, we hardly ever use it anymore.
it's horrible to hear your parents did that
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KikuMizu Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Better than the wooden spoon on my butt. Still, it made me into the person I am so I have no hard feelings. Plus, it was usually only when I was being a really brat anyway.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wooden spoons...
God I hate them xD
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:iconkikumizu:
KikuMizu Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Got one broken on my butt once. I have mixed feelings about them, because I like them better than the plastic ones.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, I know, only thing worse about wood is splinters
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Writer
This is a really nice poem! :) Great work!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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Sheldor123 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That's really nice.. Keep on writing, you have talent :)
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for reading ^^
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