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An unpleasant feeling you may think
The feeling cannot be described in only ink
It can come and go in just a blink
It would be the bitter taste if life would be a drink

It's what gets us down
It's what leaves us with a frown
Sometimes makes us want to leave town
And sometimes makes us want ourselves to drown

It sure isn't much fun
We always want it to be over and done
We can't make it undone

Pain, is a measurement of will power
Recovering from pain may take more than an hour
But in the end you will blossom like a flower
Pain is only a measurement of how strong our will power is.
The more pain a person can take, the stronger a person is.

Like a great man once said ''It's not about how hard you can hit, it's about how hard you can get hit''

Written by Jerrel Simons
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JinxKatKazama Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Writer
Because in the end, from ashes beautiful things must rise
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maukieyumiz Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
perfect love the messige
what ever sh** we go through, it makes us better people
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah it does
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sen22 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
If there would be no feelings and no pain we would be nothing more than the trees with the brains.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
not sure if that would be weird, or awesome
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sen22 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I think it would be both. But from the negative, there would be no love and no hatred what keeps the world and the balance.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah
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chalekam Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eloquent poetry that rhymes?! Perfect! Enduring is not easy, and it warms the heart to know that such a burden is not suffered for nothing, or alone. Thank you so much!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eloquent? Sorry, my English skills are not that great. Could you perhaps explain what ''eloquent'' means?
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chalekam Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eloquent - Well said, vivid and artistic. (this is not a dictionary definition BTW) Compare the dialogue of shows like Spartacus, Rome, 300 - the frank miller movie. they speak in a way which is pleasing to hear.
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