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Love is when somebody gives you a shoulder to cry on.
Love is when somebody makes you laugh when you're sad.
Love is when you miss somebody whenever they are gone.
Love is when whenever you see that person you feel glad.

Loving somebody is choosing not to see their flaws.
A human being will never be perfect.
Everything that person does you will give a loud applause.
Cause in your eyes everything that person does is correct.

You want them to smile.
You would work extra just to be with that person.
Even if it would be just for a while.
Love is unconditional, that's the truth.
I don't always write love poetry
But when I do
I'm actually down as shit >.>

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Written by Jerrel Simons
Koratoshisfriend
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elizabeth-123 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Student
beautiful 
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013   General Artist
Your touching literature has been featured here
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't even know what to say
Thank you so very much
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013   General Artist
:heart:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
Thank you ^^
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:heart:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013   General Artist
c:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
c: let's see who can smile the longest
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Beautiful and true!!!:blowkiss:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am glad you like it ^^
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Me too!!:D
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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CherryChimes Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this. It was rather pretty.
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I am glad you liked it
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Hello.
You have been featured in my newest Couple and friends-feature.
Please check it out and give it a favourite if you enjoyed it.
Have a nice week! :heart:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the feature ^^
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Great!!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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No problem(:
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Anna-Gracie Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
(^.^)
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^^
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(:
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^^
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
nice!!!!!!!!!
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks xD
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
ur wels
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
?
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
your welcome XD
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okay then xD
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
This is wonderful and it really shows your viewpoint about this particular topic.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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I Agree with that..
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wdnest Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Lovely. You have captured this well. It comes in all shapes and forms. Lovely
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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MikaelEson Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Love is but a fleeting feeling
Fueled by selfish greed
Evolutionarily and psychologically explained
By our strong sexual needs

To say that love is unconditional
Is to spit in the face of the lonely
It's a lie that is embarrassing
To your intellectual honesty

You think that love is magic,
Equally deserved and equally received?
That the bullied, ugly girl you never spoke to
Felt a lesser need?

No, my friend, the world is shallow
And love is blind those
Who have yet to open their eyes
Love is conditional, that's the truth
And nothing good ever comes from
Living deluded by lies.
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awesomechick14 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Well said bro, well said.
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love is not just a feeling filled by greed and sexual needs, love also exists between you, your family and your friends.

Trust me, I know what it feels like to feel lonely, and to people who are lonely it's actualy a big relief to know that your family will love you no matter what. Sure you can have your indifferences at times, but you love each other no matter what.

The love you're speaking off is the one created by a chemical inside the brain of every human being, the love I'm speaking of is not triggered by this chemical. Bullied ugly girl you say? Dude I was not only bullied I was nearly murdered by my bullies a few times, I know what it's like to be bullied so I always try to help people who are bullied. ugly? Every person is beautiful in their own way, be it on the inside or the outside.

The reality is cruel that I know. So why are you trying to take that what makes those happy in this cruel world? Love is not conditional, it's true that people who love each other have fights at times. But why do they stay together then? That's love, it's like an invisible glue making people stick together.

To say that love is a lie, will probably mean that love has betrayed you once before my friend.

If you are offended or anything then I'm sorry, but I have to stand up for my beliefs
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MikaelEson Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist
No hard feelings mate :) I just felt compelled to write. I guess I too could be said to write poetry when I feel down ;)
Let's just say that the conditionality of love has taught me a lot about this world, and to be honest, it's a knowledge that has brought me a piece of mind because it explains things. When I wrote about the ugly girl, what I meant was that ugly people, and generally unattractive people, do not experience as much love as beautiful people; simply because of shallow reasons. That is why love is indeed conditional. The same is true wether the relationships are sexual or not. Unattractive people, be it on the inside or the outside, do not necessarily feel a lesser need for love but will end up getting just that.
Why is it important to know this? Because the truth is important, no matter what the truth is.

Anyway, I didn't mean to offend. Consider my text an insight into another perspective of love. People like romance, and if I'd publish my response, it'd get less attention than yours since it's not what people want to read.

Peace
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's okay my friend, and don't say that you won't get as less attention because you might get attention just because you think outside of the box
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Hasakitsuki Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
Instant fave!
I think this describes very accurately the feeling. Well-written :clap:
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thanks ^^
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Sugar1012 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Student General Artist
really good, i like this, i have one piece of advice if you want to hear it, dont have to if you dont want to, your choice, wont change my opinion about liking this
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
sure thing
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Sugar1012 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student General Artist
well the first part of the poem was all love is... which was really cool, and then the secong part of the poem was so good too, but i found it didnt flow togetther because you had changed the structure form love is... to just writing, i know this is a style and im not trying to crush you creativity but i think you could make the transition of structure alot smoother
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Koratoshisfriend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I still have some trouble with structures and such
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