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You see that old house up there?
Standing there up on that small hill
It's the one with that old rocking chair
When you look at it, do you feel a chill?

A chill running down your spine,
Striking you with a sense of fear.
The sight is something you can't define
But the sight alone will make your eyes tear.

The history behind the house is lost,
The people in town, do not yet know.
How the house had survived the frost.
Now there always sits a crow.

A crow sitting on the old rocking chair,
Guarding the house like it's owner did.
In the crow's eye is a small tear,
Looking where it's owner hid.
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I really suck at making up titles xD

okay let's ask a good question
What do the following numbers (in this order) have to do with the poem?
7-8-9-10-7-8-9-10-10-9-8-7-10-9-8-7

Everybody reading this have a nice day and hope to see ya again sometime

Written by Jerrel Simons
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:iconjaffagurl:
Ooh yeah! It's the number of syllables in each line! and I didn't look at the comments until after I worked it out honest ^_^
Great poem btw!
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~Koratoshisfriend Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you got it correct xD
and thanks for reading
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~Koratoshisfriend Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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~IchiHitsuFangirl Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*reads other comments* I know! It's the syllables! I is so smart xD
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~Koratoshisfriend Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no shit xD
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~Feanor-the-Dragon Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow... Chilling.
And those numbers... are the syllabic patterns, or whatever that is supposed to be called xD... The number of syllables to each line.
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~Koratoshisfriend Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes that's true
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~Kailani-e Oct 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
xD ^^ Awesome sauce!~ (but I already told you this haven't I ^^) xD I still love the syllable scheme!
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~Koratoshisfriend Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks xD
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