As you live you make friends,
How long they will stay that depends.
You will have fun and have good times,
You will also feel bad sometimes.
Sometimes friends will stay for years,
Sometimes friends will leave you in tears.
Then we ask who truly is our friend,
Do some of them just pretend?
Some friends will leave when things get tough,
Seeing somebody in pain is always a little rough.
But some of them will stay by your side,
They will help you stand up and fight.
If you have one true friend,
Be it a boy or a girl friend.
You can consider yourself blessed,
Cause they will always help you when you are depressed.
A true friend will stick by you,
And trust me, they will always come through
The simplicity of the words and line structures help to get the reader to trust the Speaker of the poem and make the content easy to relate to.
Originality:
The emotion in this poetry expresses the value you have for your friend. It's a sweet and touching piece that a lot of people will relate to, because everyone has someone in their life that fits this description.
Technique:
The rhyme scheme you've used really helps to pace the poem and keep reader interest.
Impact:
Thank you for writing this piece. I was reminded of my friends who fit this description, and I hope you don't mind that I shared your poem - through a link - with them on Facebook!