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As you live you make friends,
How long they will stay that depends.
You will have fun and have good times,
You will also feel bad sometimes.

Sometimes friends will stay for years,
Sometimes friends will leave you in tears.
Then we ask who truly is our friend,
Do some of them just pretend?

Some friends will leave when things get tough,
Seeing somebody in pain is always a little rough.
But some of them will stay by your side,
They will help you stand up and fight.

If you have one true friend,
Be it a boy or a girl friend.
You can consider yourself blessed,
Cause they will always help you when you are depressed.

A true friend will stick by you,
And trust me, they will always come through
:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Hi, everybody!
Hai Doctor Nick! :icondrnickplz:
How are you feeling lovely people?

This poem was inspired by a friend of mine namely, :iconjetblackheartxxx: have a look at her works.
Also have a look at :iconsmurfeyn: her page, she's an in real life friend of mine and really was a ray of light in a dark time (there explained the picture as well xD)

Let's get down to bussiness:
Got any feedback? Please leave it in the comments.
Got a story considering friends? Leave them in comments or note me, I love to hear stories and I love helping people, I might not be a huge help but I will try.
If you like it you're welcome to check out the rest of my gallery ^^

Written by Jerrel Simons
© Jerrel Simons AKA Koratoshisfriend

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~magalbagal Sep 2, 2012  Student Writer
love it
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~Koratoshisfriend Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you do
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*H-A-Cooke Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Vision:

The simplicity of the words and line structures help to get the reader to trust the Speaker of the poem and make the content easy to relate to.

Originality:

The emotion in this poetry expresses the value you have for your friend. It's a sweet and touching piece that a lot of people will relate to, because everyone has someone in their life that fits this description.

Technique:

The rhyme scheme you've used really helps to pace the poem and keep reader interest.

Impact:

Thank you for writing this piece. I was reminded of my friends who fit this description, and I hope you don't mind that I shared your poem - through a link - with them on Facebook!
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~Koratoshisfriend Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you this really helped ^^
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*H-A-Cooke Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! It definitely struck a chord in me so I wanted to let you know!
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This is such a lovely poem.:love: I am blessed.:heart:
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, glad you like it
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~chalekam Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great insight! I believe in order to have a true BFF you must be one 2
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes ^^
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~NicolaiGrey Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i agree
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