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Staring at a blank paper
Is an artist's worst nightmare.
The artist is the shaper,
Their thoughts somewhere up in the air.

They are searching for inspiration,
Sometimes they are even searching the skies.
It takes a lot of concentration,
But you can always see the passion burning in their eyes.

Being an artist does not always mean you're creative.
It just means that you want to create something,
And never want to give up.
An inspired person without creative skill or experience can sometimes create the most beautiful art, just because they are inspired and don't want to give up

Picture is from a free stock image and later edited by me
Written by Jerrel Simons

Jerrel Simons AKA Koratoshisfriend

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EDIT: so this morning I woke up, drank some coffee, played a game with ma dog and then I booted up my computer, I went to Deviantart and nearly got a heart attack.
THANK YOU ALL SO VERY MUCH, I will reply to all your comments in a while and I can't thank anyone of you enough.
Thank you, have a cookie and hope you all have a pleasant day ^^

EDIT EDIT: I fixed some punctuation errors that were suggested by some of you, please say so if there are any more errors and please point out where
:iconrlytearplz: I love you all!

EDIT EDIT EDIT: So I come back here to check the views and I notice that it's OVER 9000!!!!
THANK YOU ALL SO VERY MUCH
HUGS AND KISSES FOR EVERYONE

If you like this work you can also check out the rest of my gallery or check the galleries of one of these awesome people who I believe deserve more attention:
:icongingaheppuli:
:iconroutani:
:iconkarvamato:
Three digital and tradition artists who are good friends of mine
:iconjetblackheartxxx:
:icon143peace:
Two amazing poets
:icontheblackwitchproject:
An amazing writer, she does mostly fanfics but even if you're not a fan you will enjoy them
And of course many more like :icongorybluecat: (who was the first to view this) :iconmailn6: :iconcandygirl960:
These people have all been my friends for quite some time and they always inspired me to do my best so please visit their pages too

I would like to thank all of you personally for giving me this amazing oppurtunity, I hope you all enjoyed this work and I hope that we all can become good friends

If you like this piece you might also wanna check this one out: [link]
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:iconmikaellakun:
Mikaellakun Jun 13, 2013   Digital Artist
THIS IS SO INCREDIBLE !
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for reading ^^
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abie1295 May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
People do have their own opinion. Some might put rules for how a great poem should be. Its' structure, rhymes, words to use, and the contents. But I do believe we don't need all of it. Art is a freestyle masterpiece. It can be in any form. Art is the tool to reach the heart of others. What good are the arts that touch the eyes of the "masters" if the majority can't see its' beauty? Art shouldn't be a luxury for only those with special eyes can see. It should be simple but touch deep inside the heart of everbody. And yours is greatly amazing in the simplest way. Still mine is just an opinion. It is subjective.
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Koratoshisfriend Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is there any way to like a comment on this site cause I would really want to like yours right now.
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abie1295 Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha, and you just did. thanks man. and again, great poem.! :D
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beexfeatheryduster Apr 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Okay so overall the piece was quite interesting, simple enough, and a theme that was easy to understand. There is still a lot you could take from it. The writer could be experiencing writer's block and the writer could be distracted by something.

Your description's are good enough and I like the reference again to the artist, to emphasize that this is not just any person, that this is an artist, and that an artist is a creator.

However there are points I do want to pick up on though, specifically the last line of the first stanza. "Their thoughts somewhere up in the air." I don't quite understand why myself, but this doesn't really seem to fit too well, it strikes me as being a bit disjointed. I think it might just be the word 'up', makes the sentence a bit too wordy.

The rhyme is there, but it is rather subtle, which is good in a way, it means that your focus isn't diverted from the poem to the rhyme scheme.

"But you can always see the passion burning in their eyes." Nope, I would re-work this sentence. It is far too wordy, and seems to almost lag and drag after the rest of the poem. It stops it a little, disrupts the flow.

The last stanza I think could do with some re-work too. It doesn't seem to end the best that it could. It leaves off almost as though there is more to be said, more that could be said.
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:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Koratoshisfriend Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I will reply to the note soon ^^
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:iconbeexfeatheryduster:
beexfeatheryduster Apr 28, 2013  Professional Writer
Okay, thank you.
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Darkness-flowers Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I adore blank paper. So many possibilities...
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