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A pencil is a small thing
Irrelevant to most
But it can create anything

It can create images of a beautiful coast
It creates images that can change your life
It creates images that will withstand time

It creates words that make you feel alive
It creates words that can describe a crime
It tells a story of the past
While looking forward to the future

A pencil shows you a world which is quite vast
It can create images that are quite obscure
A pencil can defeat a sword
But it can also create a sword

So if you're ever down
And you are sitting in your room with a frown
Pick up a pencil
And let it guide you to a world
Beyond your wildest dreams
:iconkoratoshisfriend:
Hello, and I'm back again
I'm afraid that I didn't do the punctuation on this one either, so if anyone could point out how I can fix that (yeah my English skills are not so good so I don't know where to put a comma or where I need to end the sentence, I definatly don't know how to do that in a poem so if anyone could point out in a comment or a note where I need to end the sentence or a put a comma I will love you forever xD)

A pencil is a small thing, but it can create so much.
An artist can use a pencil to show us a world that we never could have imagined.
Anyone can use a pencil, anyone can create art.
Art is not just about image, it's about what it means to the creator and the people who view it, even the doodles of a 2 year old kid can be amazing, as long as it means something to the child itself.
If there is a person who loves your art and ten people who don't, than you shouldn't let those 10 people get to you. You should care about the one who does like it.
I came here to Deviantart not only to improve my art, but also to make some friends, and I must say those friends, are some of the best I ever had.
Sorry for the long history lesson xD

Oh yeah and next time I will try to come up with a more creative title cause these just seem to simple xD

Written by Jerrel Simons
© Jerrel Simons AKA Koratoshisfriend

(Image was a free stock from this site: [link] and was later edited by me)

Please leave feedback, so I can improve my art

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~shehrozeameen Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You need not edit this poem; its perfect the way it is;

Captures the essence of the pencil
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it ^^
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~shehrozeameen Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was a powerful poem - a tribute in my eyes
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you enjoyed, you can always check out the rest of my gallery
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~shehrozeameen Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
sure thing :)

Will do - hopefully you'll find a response from me every now and then.
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hope so too ^^
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~shehrozeameen Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)

You really are outspoken in your poems, you know that?
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I did not know that yet, why do you think so?
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~TheMADGrimReaper Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"... but also to make some friends, and I must say those friends, are some of the best I ever had." That's cutee! :iconletmehugyouplz:

Yep,a pencil can beat a sword in many ways and yes,everyone can create art but just few people have the gift to make them. And I believe YOU, Jerrel Simons have this gift! :iconawwyeahplz: Keep doing your awesome job ~
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~Koratoshisfriend Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you but you give me too much credit >//<
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