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Cherry blossoms fall
Spring comes around once more
Washing away death
  • Listening to: A link to the rock
  • Reading: Blake's works
  • Watching: A weird livestream
  • Playing: Realm of the Mad God
  • Eating: Crisps
  • Drinking: Coke
Some of you may have noticed that over the course of the past 24 hours the amount of deviations I had and journals was severely cut down.

Over the past 24 hours my number of deviations and journals combined, which was somewhere over 300 was cut down to 83 in total (84 counting this one).

Primarily because I thought the writing in those pieces was redundant or because I simply did not like the piece in my gallery anymore.

In case of poetry pieces I made an exception.

Except for a few really old pieces I kept most of them and put them in a special folder in my gallery.

There are only a few pieces in that folder that I really like, however I want to put them next to my new pieces, which are of course in a different folder, just to see the ''progress'' I have made when it comes to writing poetry ever since coming to DA.

Now that progress, if you can even call it that, was made possible by hard work on my part to try and fix pieces as much as possible (however, I do not allow myself to alter a piece after uploading it unless I made a spelling error that I did not notice earlier). However, it is more thanks to you guys.

People like :iconshehrozeameen: and :iconnichrysalis: who both were inspirations as writers and on occasion both guided me with certain pieces.

The various friends I made on DeviantArt like :icontinybluecat: :iconkarvamato: :icondintrum: :iconhomicidal-potato: are names that spring to mind immediately since they are some of my oldest friends on DA and of course some of the most wonderful people I have ever met.

Of course, this is just a short version of the list of friends I made over the years on DeviantArt, writing that one down would take hours.

To all my watchers who have over the years stuck with me, I thank you all. You kept inspiring me to write and improve my writing.

From the depth of my heart to all of you:

THANK YOU!
  • Listening to: A link to the rock
  • Reading: Blake's works
  • Watching: A weird livestream
  • Playing: Realm of the Mad God
  • Eating: Crisps
  • Drinking: Coke
check it out here: qwibes.deviantart.com/art/The-…

also I got a new poem out: koratoshisfriend.deviantart.co…
So I got that going for me which is nice.

On another note I graduated and turned 18 sooo...
yay I suppose?
Her eyes clouded by
nightmares of the past
Angst controls her life
as shadows chase her
each and every day
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Title is under construction.

Feedback is appreciated and if you liked it just slapping that favourite button in the face (don't worry, he/she/it is a bit of an arse anyway so don't feel bad about it) helps out a great deal.

Thank you for reading.

Written by Jerrel Simons
© :iconkoratoshisfriend:

PS:
If you have the time, checking out my friend Qwibes' work would be greatly appreciated.
Here's a link to a project named ''the butterfly project'': qwibes.deviantart.com/art/The-…
I believe it is worth checking out.
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I hear the cries of the damned calling me out
Noodlot is here, its mark leaving no doubt
Those who were meant to live, are now gone, forsworn
Its seeds here leave behind decay
As death awaits, one left astray
There is still hope, there is a way
I carry that hope, on my back 'tis borne
Those who were meant to live, are now gone, forsworn
I hear the cries of the damned calling me out
It knows I am here, I must win this bout

Stay and fight destiny, or to flee and hide
Is it something with which I can abide?
Time is running out for me to choose what to do
Do I have the courage needed?
To not make this choice I pleaded
All my pleas remain unheeded
The sun is rising, grass covered with dew
Time is running out for me to choose what to do
Stay and fight destiny, or to flee and hide
It is now or never, time to decide

Noodlot, leaving none - cried voices in my head
Murderous screams - terror - bring back the dead
The sun shines, vitriolic, a dark halo
The people passing by - astray
For them I suffer - to delay
Noodlot; Death must not have its day
Fate can be changed - choice is for us to know
Noodlot, leaving none - cried voices in my head
I enter, afraid, with sadness I dread

I dread the flickering of the light ahead
I enter afraid, the darkness I dread
Why I am facing my fears I do not know
The dark before me starts to taunt
Old corpses are starting to haunt
Rotten, broken and all with gaunt
There is no time to sing the songs of woe
Why I am facing my fears I do not know
I dread the flickering of the light ahead
For when it dies out, I will too be dead
Triumph against failure
Written in collaboration with :iconshehrozeameen:.
Due to me being a tardy fuck it's a bit shorter than the last piece Winterspell.
Find Winterspell here: koratoshisfriend.deviantart.co… and here: shehrozeameen.deviantart.com/a…

Hopefully we might continue this project now I have time and am less of a tardy fuck.
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Jerrel
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:iconohaiplz:

Hello there,

I see you stumbled upon my dA account.
Well allow me to introduce myself.
The name is Jerrel, I am 18 year old and I reside in the south east of the Netherlands in the province by the name of Limburg.
I am a hobbyist writer with an interest in poetry primarily with some prose on the side.
Currently I am not uploading much due to school and a poetry project alongside shehrozeameen.

Next (presumed) date of uploading a poem: 3-2-2014 (or earlier depending on the schedule)
Next (presumed) date of uploading a prose piece: No works in progress until further notice
Next (presumed) date of uploading a part of the poetry project: Somewhere around 5-2-2014 depending on the workload.

Quick sample of my writing for anyone interested:

''The cold darkness slowly creeps in
Delusions start to fade away
The soft sound of a violin
The guide of those who lost their way
Death greeted him with a dark grin
As he approached his mortal prey''

This is from the collaboration with :iconshehrozeameen: check him out he is an amazing writer. (Name of piece in question: ''Winterspell I: When the Sun Dawned'' find it in my gallery and shehrozeameen's gallery.)

Find me on Steam: JSimons
Interests
  • Listening to: A link to the rock
  • Reading: Blake's works
  • Watching: A weird livestream
  • Playing: Realm of the Mad God
  • Eating: Crisps
  • Drinking: Coke
Some of you may have noticed that over the course of the past 24 hours the amount of deviations I had and journals was severely cut down.

Over the past 24 hours my number of deviations and journals combined, which was somewhere over 300 was cut down to 83 in total (84 counting this one).

Primarily because I thought the writing in those pieces was redundant or because I simply did not like the piece in my gallery anymore.

In case of poetry pieces I made an exception.

Except for a few really old pieces I kept most of them and put them in a special folder in my gallery.

There are only a few pieces in that folder that I really like, however I want to put them next to my new pieces, which are of course in a different folder, just to see the ''progress'' I have made when it comes to writing poetry ever since coming to DA.

Now that progress, if you can even call it that, was made possible by hard work on my part to try and fix pieces as much as possible (however, I do not allow myself to alter a piece after uploading it unless I made a spelling error that I did not notice earlier). However, it is more thanks to you guys.

People like :iconshehrozeameen: and :iconnichrysalis: who both were inspirations as writers and on occasion both guided me with certain pieces.

The various friends I made on DeviantArt like :icontinybluecat: :iconkarvamato: :icondintrum: :iconhomicidal-potato: are names that spring to mind immediately since they are some of my oldest friends on DA and of course some of the most wonderful people I have ever met.

Of course, this is just a short version of the list of friends I made over the years on DeviantArt, writing that one down would take hours.

To all my watchers who have over the years stuck with me, I thank you all. You kept inspiring me to write and improve my writing.

From the depth of my heart to all of you:

THANK YOU!

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:icondoloriferousfrost:
DoloriferousFrost Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the Watch :D
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Samurai41 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
thanks for adding me to your watch, amigo. :D
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Felzm Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi again, my friend, and Very Happy Birthday, :)!!!
:wave: :clap: :clap: :clap:, greetings my friend, :party: and :cake:!!! :)
I hope you had a very great time on your special day that was already on your country, :)!!!
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bkworm5 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy birthday! Lily Wishing a Happy Birthday birthday cake Happy Birthday Godliek :D Happy Birthday Grin
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mormonbookworm Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, thank for the watch!
If I may, can I ask why you watched me?
This help me figure out what I'm doing right here on dA.
Hope you have a great day, new friend!
MBW
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